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2010
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Some people believe that charity organizations should give the aid to those who are in great needs, some people think that charity organizations should concentrate on helping people who live in their own country. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (抽象类)
Introduction
Background – theme – view
Charity organization
什么是慈善组织，它的目的是什么，它的作用是什么，什么时候会出现对于慈善组织的讨论？
When people suffer some natural disasters and are confronted with difficulties, they may expect the aid from others, especially charity organizations. However, there is an opinion that charity organizations should help people of their own country instead of giving aid to whoever in need. From my perspective, the aid should be given to those in need regardless of their nationality.
Natural disasters, war or social turmoil, all these factors may render people fall into poverty and diseases. The rise of charity organizations is associated with the emergence of these disasters. They relieve people from great sufferings and give people in need hope of survival. However, there is an opinion that aid from charities should only be given to people living in their countries while others think that charity should benefit all people. I tend to believe the latter is of more justification.
Body 1: why we should give help to those in great needs? What is the responsibility of charity organizations?
To help those in great needs is a reflection of moral obligation/duty for human beings.（意义） And this practice of helping others will have numerous/many positive effects involving/including promoting economic development and enhancing social harmony. （影响和作用）Meanwhile, the aid from charity organizations may cover a wide range of people and may be more transparent. However, there are some disadvantages of charity organizations. The money donated by charity organizations may be taken away by local officials and cannot reach those who are really in need. What’s more, charity organizations tend to give aid to those areas which are frequently reported by the media. This will cause regional imbalance or even regional conflict.
Body 2: whether aid from charities should only be given to local people?
As for those who advocate that aid for charity organization should be given to people living in their own country, I hold conservative attitude. There is no denying that it is more effective for charity organizations to give aid to local people. However, how to ensure fairness/equality among different peoples is the priority for charities. Fair distribution of resources and aid is an objective reflection of human virtues. （反证）If every individual or every organization just focus on their own interest, the world will become indifferent and unfriendly.
In conclusion, charity organization should give aid to people who are in great need without considering their social background, their nationality and something irrelevant. However, the aid should be supervised and monitored by some independent organizations for fear of corruption or embezzlement. / However, the aid should be controlled or supervised by some dependent organizations so that it can reach the targeted people.
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In today's world, it is private companies rather than governments who pay for and carry out most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages? (政府决策类)
Background – theme –view
In present society, there is an increasing tendency that private companies begin to take up numerous/ various social projects. In the past, most scientific research was carried out/ performed by the government. However, the government’s role is being replaced by private enterprises. From my perspective, /in my opinion / from my point of view, /as far as I am concerned, this trend has some merits despite some negative effects / despite some drawbacks.
Body 1: advantages of private company’s conducting scientific research: it is a trend that a growing number of scientific research projects are being undertaken by private companies. Obviously, there are some advantages of this tendency. (1) high efficiency. (2) cost-saving. The ultimate purpose/target of company’s activities is to obtain profits; therefore, they will do their utmost to reduce/lower cost of research. This practice will to some degree save resources. （3）competition will make the companies involved in technological innovation.
Body 2: however, there is no denying that there remain some drawbacks concerning the private company’s involvement in scientific research solely. (1) Compared with the government’s activity, private companies cover less people. (2) Insufficient investment. So it is not enough to carry out large scale projects such as some space exploration programs.
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The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider, the rich get richer, the poor even get poorer, what problems can the situation cause and give the solutions. (社会现象/Report)
回答问题，理清思路：
什么导致贫富差距？贫富差距的表现形式？贫富差距的影响是什么？什么是贫富差距？
What? Why? How?
What is the gap between the rich and the poor?
Why there is the gap between the rich and the poor?
How to deal with the gap between the rich and the poor?
(从社会现象入手) In today’s society, it is not uncommon that some people live a luxurious life with splendid houses, private airplanes and yachts. However, a majority of people are living in slums and they may worry about their next meal. It is obvious that the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider. This phenomenon /this issue / this problem will cause / bring about / contribute to / give rise to some negative effects on both society and individuals, so some solutions should be found out immediately.
Body 1:(1) social turmoil /damage social stability. (2) hinder the economic development. (3) this will cause a great fortune controlled by a handful of people, thus leading to the waste of resources. (4) unfair distribution of resources.
Body 2：（1） widening income gap is largely associated with unfair education. Therefore, to narrow down the gap between the rich and poor, the government should first guarantee that people have equal access to education opportunities. (2) some new tax policies should be implemented. Specifically, more taxes should be levied against the wealthy people and these should be used in improving poor people’s living standard, building public facilities and infrastructure. (3) the government should provide people with more vacancies and job. In the meantime, more efforts should be made to reduce unemployment rate. (4) the government should provide adequate and cover-all social security.
In conclusion, 贫富分化是当前很多国家面临的问题，这个问题会带来很多的社会负面影响，比如社会的动荡以及资源的浪费。在解决贫富差距的问题上，政府有不可推卸的责任，比如改革税收, 减少失业率等等。
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Nowadays some people have the anti-social behavior and are lack of respect to others. What are the reasons? Give your suggestions. (Report)
Nowadays, some young people show no respect to the elderly. What are the reasons? Give your suggestions?
What? Why? How?
In present society, there is a phenomenon that some young people tend to lose social responsibility and show no respect to others. The rise of this anti-social behavior is associated with/ is attributed to a combination of factors such as a person’s education or family background. And it may have some serious social impact; therefore, it is advisable to find solutions.
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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (科技类)
(模板式) It is not a rare scene that/ It is not uncommon that airplane is increasingly popular when people choose to travel abroad or to some tourist attraction. However, some people think that to travel by airplane is expensive and thus air travel can only benefit the wealthy people. From my perspective, the acceleration of technology and economy renders air travel a widely acceptable and accessible means of transportation. /it is hasty to conclude that / it is superficial to say that / I think whether this idea is justifiable should be analyzed from several perspectives.
Body 1:为什么有人认为AIR TRAVEL 对富人有利？
Topic sentence: there is no doubt that to travel by air is comparatively expensive due to its considerable consumption of fuel and exceeding services. In the past, only a small number of people could enjoy the flight. Most people were unable to afford the tickets with paramount prices. On the other hand, air travel has brought about immense convenience and efficiency to businessman. Hence, their trade can be promoted and their income largely improved. However, their prosperity is based on the erosion /damage of public benefits. For example, air travel is the culprit of emission of greenhouse gases, which leads to global warming. In the meantime, the development of air travel may render the rich people richer, and thus widening the gap between haves and have-nots.
Body 2: 难道AIR TRAVEL只对富人有利吗？穷人是否可以得利？
Topic sentence: however, the development of technology and economy has substantially improved people’s affordability. That is to say, an increasing number of people can afford the expensive tickets of air flight when they travel abroad or to some remote places. Nowadays, air travel is no longer regarded as the privilege of some minority. On the other hand, airplane is being used in many fields such as the transportation of fruits and vegetables. This practice renders people in every country to buy the commodities they want. Thus the market is developed and people’s living standard improved.
Conclusion:
In conclusion / in summary/ according to the analysis, it is undeniable that in the past air travel belonged to the privilege of few richest people due to its high prices. However, technological innovation and economic development have changed the case. Nowadays, air travel is beneficial to more and more people including those with less income and wealth.
Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world than other people. However, some others believe that scientists are the most important. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (抽象类)
In the history of human beings, politicians and scientists played an important role in social development.
The comparison between different careers and social positions is always of interest for most people.
Most people are always interested in comparing different careers and social positions so as to figure out which one is of more importance.
Politician and scientist, who is more important is always an issue of considerable controversy. Some people think politicians are responsible for social order and public welfare, thus they are the most important ones in our society. However, some others hold that scientists take prominent position in the world due to their contribution and achievements. As for me, there is no consensus over which one is superior to another, but rather that both are indispensable to the development of our society.
Body 1: the importance of politicians and their shortcomings. (social security, social welfare, public interest, social order.= corruption, power abuse, deceit.)
Body 2: the importance of scientists and their shortcomings. (technologies, living standard, medicine, comfortable, explore some unknown fields, = the invention of nuclear bombs, wars, pressure, loss of belief because we don’t believe supernatural power.)
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Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages? (社会现象类)
Body 1: 经济发展带来社会道德观的丧失，其具体表现为什么。（例证）(1) money worship (2) materialism (3) consumerism (4) moral degradation- social responsibility.
Body 2: 道德丧失带来的弊端和负面影响。(1) lack of responsibility, service (2) social order (3) progress will cease (4) mutual trust (5) barrier to economic development (5) increase of crimes (6) waste of resources.
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Technological progress has brought great changes to our society in the last 100 years. However, some people think that it has also brought some negative effects at the same time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this point? （科技类）
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Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society? (社会现象/Report)
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Different people have different opinions on the issue whether zoos should be built to protect wild animals. What is your opinion? (政府决策类)
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Lately, more and more work has to be done by machines. Do you think the positive impact on the development outweigh negative impact on individuals and society? (科技类)
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Recently, children are spending much time on TV instead of active and creative things, why do you think this is a case? What measures will be helpful to change this problem? (教育类/Report)
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Some people think the fact that travel by air is becoming cheaper and cheaper is beneficial, other people think it has drawbacks to environment and the recourses of the world. What is your opinion?(科技类)
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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
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Some people think the governments should act to decide how people live in order to make a healthier life. Others think individual should decide their own lifestyle. Discuss both view and give your opinion.(政府决策类)
Infringe on individual rights.
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It has been suggested that everyone in the world want to own a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think disadvantage of such a development outweigh advantages? (科技类)
The advantages and disadvantages of scientific products.
Body 1: disadvantages. 1. Exhaustion of energy, for example, fridge and car. 2. New problems, such as the car emission damages environment; fridge emission of CFC, damage to ozone-hole. 3. Change our way of life. the rise of TV suffocates our creativity and deprives us of more outdoor activities. 4. Quickened our living pace, make the world more competitive, reduced our leisure time, and render interpersonal relationship more indifferent.
Body 2: however, it does not mean that there are no redeeming features of technological products. 1. Improve people’s living standard. 2. Enhance efficiency. 3. Bring about convenience. 4. Free people from laborious work.
Conclusion: technological innovation is an inevitable trend. More products will emerge into people’s life. products themselves should not blame for people’s deteriorating living quality but people’s own values and attitudes to life. on a whole, advantages of technological products provide more benefits for people in modern world.
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Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (教育类)
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Nowadays, distance-learning programs are such a common thing for us, but some people argue that they're not as good as those by attending in a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (教育类)
Telecommunication.
Body 1. Advantages of distance-learning. 1. Cost-saving. What you need is just the internet and a computer. Tuition is usually low and even free of charge. As for those students without affordability, it is a blessing. 2. Convenient. As far as the internet reaches, you can have access to the program without paying for the fees of transportation and expensive teaching facilities. 3. Flexibility. Adjust and arrange according to your schedule.
Body 2. Disadvantages compared with attending college in person: 1. Lack of interaction. 2. Skills cannot be transmitted such as car repairing. The advantages of in-person study.
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Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less controlling will help children deal with adults life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. (教育类)
Similar: should children be disciplined at an early age?
Body 1: why children should obey rules and listen to their parents? 1. Immature. Not know what is right and wrong while parents have more experiences. 2. Discipline from children makes them aware of the social rules.
Body 2: less control may bring some negative effects.
Conclusion: children should obey rules and listen to parents. However, parents should avoid interfere with children’s affairs too much. And excessively strict control may produce effects opposite to expectation.
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Many young people today leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. Why do you think this is happening？What can be done to encourage a positive attitude to learning in young people？(教育类/Report)
Body 1. Why students hate learning? 1. Boring. Teachers’ teaching method not so varied. 2. In china, the main means of teaching is spoon-feeding instead of arousing students’ interest. 3. Many college students cannot find decent jobs when their graduate, which makes some people believe that study is useless in the future. 4. Parents’ and teachers’ high expectation make them feel the target unachievable. 5. Some of them are not internally motivated. 6. Contents of teaching are outdated. (teach them some useful skills and knowledge for their future career)
Body 2. How to encourage students to learn: corresponding methods.
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Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access to university education, so people think universities should make it especially easy for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (教育类)
Body 1. What is the cause of the phenomenon? 1. Lack of educational resources: teachers and teaching facilities, which are rich in cities and wealthier areas. 2. Expensive tuition in today’s university. 3. Universities’ recruitment is not so transparent and fair.
Body 2: whether the university should take the responsibility and make it easier for students to get in university? 1. We should find the root cause and solve some basic problems such as the inequality of education resources. 2. Reduce or remove some tuition, especially for those excellent students but of lower economic status. 3. Ensure transparent recruitment.
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Air travel and telecommunication makes the communication all over the world closer. To what extent do you agree that the society benefits from international tourism and business?
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（参考标准分类全球化主题）
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An interesting number of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development? (社会现象类)
(参考标准分类生活方式和社会观念)
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Some people fail to benefit from international travel. Some people believe international travel leads to prejudice instead of knowledge. What are the reasons and what can be done to relieve the problem? (社会现象/Report)
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Nowadays
Body 1: advantages. 1. The qualities of young people. They do things with enthusiasm; they are superior in physical condition, which enables them to fulfill some tough jobs; they are not confined to the conventions and they are willing to try new things; they are ready to face challenges. 2. 具体结合政府部门任要职：目前大多数国家政府部门由年龄比较大的人支配（dominated by elderly people）, the involvement of young people can instill new life into the government system. 3. This practice can give young people more opportunities to know the world and realize their dreams.
Body 2: disadvantages. 1. Negative qualities of young people: lack of social experiences; absence of patience; vulnerable to some shortcomings such as lack of composure. 2. 结合政府部门：policy has an immense on people’s life; any decision may have serious consequence, thus some immature decision cannot be remedied.
Conclusion: despite shortcomings, we should give young people more opportunities. Why? As for any individual, failure is inevitable. And recurrent failures enable young people to grow mature and take responsibility in the future.
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Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? (教育类)
Life-long education.
Body 1: analysis of the disadvantages and advantages of self-study. Advantages: flexibility of schedule; based on personal interest; unnecessary to pay tuition, thus low cost. However, disadvantages: lack of guidance; interaction and communication; persistence; vulnerable to disturbance and distractions; the plan of study is not scientific.
Body 2: compared with self-study, class education has some advantages: interaction and communication; scientific curriculum; systematic teaching plan. 关键问题，怎样和成年人教育结合：针对成年人需要工作，时间冲突的问题，我们可以提供晚上的班级，或者充分利用业余时间去学习，有效解决成年人时间冲突。
Conclusion: class education is more effective and systematic. Adults should combine self-study with class education. They can overcome some difficulties and attend the class.
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The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems? What measures can be used to solve these problems? (政府决策类/Report)
Body 1: 农业人口进入城市带来的相关问题：首先，导致城市人口剧增，造成基础设施建设滞后，公共设施难以跟上；其次，带来就业压力；再次，很多农业人口不具备相关技能，无法就业，形成城市无业人口，带来安全隐患；并且，农业人口大量进城，导致农业缺乏劳动力，农业产量降低。
Body 2: how to deal with these problems? 1. Government investment in building public infrastructure and public facilities. 2. The government should enact some policies and give enterprises some subsidies in recruiting people from countryside; boost economy development in order to create more positions. 3. The government should give people more training of technical skills. 4. The government should invest more in agriculture, encouraging more people to engage in farming. Government should give more subsidies to farmers, thus spurring their enthusiasm in farming.
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University students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree？(教育类)
是不是“谁受益，谁付钱”？
Body 1: of course students can benefit a lot from university education. For example, theoretical knowledge and practical techniques, which are helpful for their further academic pursuit and future employment. Through university education, students can learn to think independently and critically, and their vision is dramatically widened. From all these facts, we may conclude that university education only benefits students and they should pay their tuition.
Body 2: however, new findings may arise when we penetrate into this issue. Who really benefits from education? 1. Students learn theoretical knowledge and practical techniques to find suitable jobs, which boost the economic development of our society and improve the overall social living standard. 2. Independent thoughts and critical thinking are necessary elements in building a just, democratic and reasonable society. People can pursue freedom and happiness in the harmonious society without worrying about the deprivation of and infringement on their individual rights. As a result, the whole society is the ultimate beneficiary of university education.
Conclusion: according to the above analysis, it is a natural conclusion that university tuition should be paid by the beneficiary, society. But society is an abstract concept, which is represented by the government. Therefore, it is the government who should be responsible for the fees of university education.
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In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished? (教育类/Report)
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Major cities grow continuously and expand into countryside,
Notes: the expansion of cities, problems for young people in cities.
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Nowadays, some organizations and charities publicize their activities by introducing special days every year like National Children's Day and Non-smoking Day. Why do they introduce special days and what effects does this have? (抽象类/Report)
Body 1: the purpose of introducing special days: 1. Promote people’s awareness about certain issues such as health, environment and children’s growth. Integrate these comparatively abstract ideals into our daily life, thus enabling every individual to have a full contact with these issues. If not, people in today’s world which is characterized by quickening living tempo and alienating relationship, they may not spare any time to pay attention to these issues seemingly irrelevant to their lives.
Body 2: effects: For example, National Children’s Day reminds people of paying more attention to children’s physical and psychological growth. And the Non-smoking Day helps people have more knowledge about the threat of health posed by smoking. Moreover, there are some other special days. In some days we are advised to turn off the light for several minutes in order to show our concern about global warming.
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In many cities, planners tend to
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Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer the work call and home call at any place, or 7days a week. Some people think this development has negative effects on both individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree? (科技类)
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Some people think it's necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. Others, however, think it's not right to do that. Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion. (抽象类)
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Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (抽象类)
Body 1: why it is necessary for a society to comply with rules and laws? 1. Guarantee social order. For example, in a society based on laws and regulations, if your rights are encroached, you can file a lawsuit to the court, where justice can be pursued. In this way, the personal avenge will be effectively avoided. 2. Ensure individual security. 3. Improve efficiency of social operation. For example, in a rule-abiding society, people are accustomed to queuing for buying tickets, waiting for the bus and many other occasions. It seems that queuing is a time-consuming process; however, facts show that it is actually the most time-saving way because every individual’s compliance with the rules reduces the possibility of friction and chaos.
Body 2: if not. 1. Chaotic society. 2. Increase of crimes. 3. Individual rights and property cannot be ensured. 4. Moral degradation. 5. Curb economic development. 6. Decrease of living standard. 7. Lack sense of security. 8. Lack of mutual trust. 9. Citizen’s lack of loyalty to their country.
Conclusion: any society should operate under rules and laws. Every citizen should have the awareness of laws. Only in this way can a society develop smoothly and harmoniously; meanwhile, a person’s rights and security be guaranteed.
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Children nowadays spend too much time on watching television and playing video games.
Body 1: the effects of children’s indulgence in watching television and video games on (1) children themselves (2) families (3) society(此处社会是虚指，可以不写对社会影响).
Body 2: find some feasible measures. First we should identify the causes in this phenomenon. Lack of parental concern and guidance. Hence, more attention and more time to accompany children, and more communication. 2. Encourage children to participate in active and creative activities. For example, travel. Visit museums.
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Some countries have introduced laws to limit the working hours. What are the reasons and do you think it a positive or negative development? (Report/社会现象类)
Body 1: why should limit working hours. Long working hours have negative impact on individual, families and society.
Body 2: advantages. Limiting working hours has positive purposes. For example, when people get off their work, they can have more time to enjoy dinner with family members, in which they can chat about some trivial things in a relaxing way. This can create a harmonious family atmosphere and thereby reducing the possibility of divorces and family violence.
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Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from a country's developing and becoming richer, so some think this cannot be avoided. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (社会现象类)
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Some
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Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn’t do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion. (教育类)
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Everyone should stay in school until they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (教育类)
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Some groups of people have benefited from modern communication technology but some people have not benefited at all, to what extend do you agree or disagree? (科技类)
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More and more center-town stores are replaced by out-of-town big stores. As a result, more and more people have to buy cars in order to get to those far-away stores. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (社会现象类)
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In the past, cultural and historical relics were stored in museums. But now, people can see them freely with the internet. Some people believe that museums are no longer needed in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (科技类)
(本题可以考虑一下，有人认为奥林匹克运动会会随着网络的发展而逐渐失去momentum,或者世博会随着网络的便利而逐渐消失.本题还非常接近网络远程教育可以取代课堂教育，参考前所述题目。)
Body 1: what kind of functions of museums can be replaced by internet? The rise of internet has posed a challenge to many traditional objects and industries. For example, internet has prompted telecommunication, which has suffocated letters. The significance of internet is of several aspects. People can have access to things which were previously inaccessible. Internet provides tremendous amount of information which might be accessed in the past by visiting museums.
Body 2: what aspects cannot be replaced by internet in terms of museums. 1. Lack of interaction. 2. The difference between image and genuine objects. Real objects are impressive and persuasive. 3. Real world and visual world are parallel, not mutually replaceable.
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Scientists believe that junk food does harm to people’s health. Some people believe that the answer to this problem is to educate, some people think it will not work. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (抽象类)
introduction: 可以充分利用定义法开头，解释什么是junk food.
Body 1: education is of some use in persuading people from eating less junk food. How to educate? 1. Tell people what is healthy food and junk food. 2. What is in junk food that damages health? 3. The promotion of awareness is effective in changing people’s dieting.
Body 2: however, the effect of education is to some degree limited in curbing the proliferation of junk food and its consumption. 1. Junk food is sometimes appetizing. It is hard to resist the temptation. 2. Junk food is profitable. Consumers are exposed to an environment where junk food is rampant. 3. Government should enact some law and regulation, controlling the sales of junk food. 4. Taxes should be levied on those who sell junk food.
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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This iscalled “peer pressure". Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? (教育类)
提示，定义法开头: Young people often feel the pressure from those of the same age around them. For example, youngsters may learn to smoke if they are surrounded by young smokers even though they are not aware why they smoke. This practice is defined as peer pressure, which is not uncommon among the youth. As for advantages and disadvantages caused by this phenomenon, it should be view from wider perspectives.
Body 1:
Body 2: positive effects. On the other hand, peer pressure, if put in an appropriate surrounding, may have some positive effects. For example, if a child is put in an environment where his friends and fellow students devote themselves to study, he or she may feel pressured to engage in study arduously too. What’s more, peer pressure may enable young people to be full of ambition. Specifically, when a young person see people around him or her make great progress in study, music or sport, instinctive motivation may spur him or her to move forward and compete with his or her utmost to achieve the same target.
Considering advantages and disadvantages, it seems hard to define peer pressure as positive or negative. However, after analyzing numerous social cases, we may find that young people exposed to peer pressure tend to be influenced negatively. Therefore, in answering the question of the topic, we may say its disadvantages outweigh advantages.
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Some people think that the teaching method with a teacher and students in a classroom will not exist by the year 2050. Do you agree or disagree? (教育类)
Why traditional teaching methods not exist in the future?
The internet(telecommunication) will replace traditional teaching.
What the future will be of our society in 2050? There are many predictions for this question. One of them is about what our education will be in several decades. Someone predicts that in 2050 the traditional teaching method in classroom will disappear completely; as a substitute, distant learning will be a common way for people to receive education. Despite some exaggeration, this view is of some truth.
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