三大建议让雅思写作“简洁漂亮”

　　小编为广大考生整理了最新的雅思考试写作辅导资料，希望对大家有所帮助。

　　下面我们就来看一些例子，体会一些写得并不成功的长句和怎样修改的建议：

　　建议一：避免空洞的单词和词组

　　1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。

　　比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live moresatisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

　　这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

　　Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

　　2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换

　　例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to helptheir parents, they did not have the options that young people have at thispoint in time。

　　“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did nothave the options that young people have now。

　　建议二：避免重复

　　1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。