5月21日雅思考试写作大作文范文(292词)

摘要:5月21日的雅思大作文考题是:Some people argue that countries should have a moral obligation to help each other; on the other hand, some people argue that a large amount of aid money does not reach the poor of the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.来看范文!

Some people argue that countries should have a moral obligation to help each other; on the other hand, some people argue that a large amount of aid money does not reach the poor of the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为国家之间应该有相互帮助的道义责任。另一方面,有人认为大笔的善款没有到达世界上穷人的手中。讨论这两种观点并给出自己的观点。

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Task:

When it comes to the issue about how to support developing countries, some people may argue that developed countries should be morally obligated to provide poor countries with monetary assistance, but others believe that that money cannot be really delivered to the people in need.

On one hand, governments of rich countries should be moral to offer impoverished countries support since it could contribute to the world peace. In those remote and poor areas, residents may suffer from various kinds of diseases, as well as poverty. If there are no external funds for them, many people may die inevitably without food supply and medical service. In order to save more poor and ill individuals, the authority of rich countries should take this moral responsibility.

On the other hand, a lot of money cannot be sent to the poor of the world due to the immaturity of institutions in those poor countries. In developed countries, there are usually strict regulations about how charitable funding should be utilized. However, for those poverty-stricken countries, their institutions may not cover every aspect, due to which some money may be corrupted by some officials through some illegal channels. Thus, even if some funding is transferred to poor countries, their officials may be an obstacle for better utilizing funding.

From my own perspective, it may be unrealistic for developing countries to solely rely on the charity from developed countries, and governments of poor countries also need to take some actions. For example, the process of using money from outsiders should be more transparent for better supervision by citizens. Besides, there could be more varieties of assistance from developed countries, including resource and technological assistance, with which those countries in need could develop the economy in a faster pace.

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