2016年6月18日雅思考试写作大作文范文

摘要:6月18日雅思大作文考察的是教育类话题关于“学校功能”的问题:学校是否应该在提供正式教育的基础上交到学生怎样形成好的行文。这一类题目是可以选择“一边倒”的方法,本题我们可以采取倒向支持一方,来看范文!

Task:It is the responsibility of schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

除了提供正规教育外,学校的责任是教导良好的行为,你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

 

Sample answer:

It is widely acknowledged that a school should be a place for children to get educated,which does not only include the learning of textbook knowledge,but also the formation of good behavior,I suppose.

Obviously,a person's behavior reflects his/her characteristic and morals to some extent,which forms the impression of individuals leaving on others.For example,people who usually help others and seldom break rules are generally considered to be well-educated citizens and are often highly spoken by others.By contrast,if a teacher who always bullies peers or damages public property are seen sa a "bad student" and being unpopular among classmates.Therefore,to behave well exerts a great impact on a person’s social life,which is by no means less important than some subject-related knowledge.

Considering the significance of good behavior mentioned above,schools should definitely attach more importance to be behavioral education.As schooling is one of the most essential components contributing to young people's future development,schools should also play the role of imparting discipline to the next generation rather then focusing on the school subjects such as mathematics,language and science.Only through this way may arouse student's attention in developing good behavior and improve a nation's overall image from the long term.

To conclude,the function of schools should be far beyond providing knowledge.To better prepare students for their future,they should introduce and emphasise the education in the behavioral aspect and involve it in the daily curriculum or teaching activities.

(230 words)

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