2016年9月24日雅思考试大作文范文

摘要：9月24日雅思写作考试真题大作文，考察的为社会类话题，要求考生讨论现代人们跟邻居交流甚少，没有团体意识，要求分析原因并给我解决方案，来看雅思中国网老师的范文。

Task：In many cities an increasing number of people don’t know their neighbors and they seems no longer develop any sense of community.

1 analysis the main reasons

2 what measures can be taken to improve this?

参考范文：

Undeniably, indifference and ignorance find their way into neighborhoods. In the essay, the underlying reasons and the practical moves will be expounded.

The primary factor leading to the significant alienation among neighbors is the prosperity of economy. In the past, individuals heavily relied on the community to rear livestock or grow rice and vegetables while in the present, people depend on themselves to work in the office and have meals in the restaurant. More importantly, to ensure an advantageous position in the face of stiff competition, employees have to spend the majority of their time working in office or at home, so they cannot afford to spare time gossiping about weather, dogs and new babies with other occupants.

Another contributing element is the intrusion of a variety of entertainments brought by advancing technology. Previously, the single recreation form of television forces residents to watch one film together. Currently, portable devices such as I-Phone, I-Pad, Kindle enable inhabitants to live in the virtual communities created by social networking websites, so they distain to socialize with other dwellers in real life.

To reverse the tendency, the government and the community committee should stand out and shoulder their responsibilities correspondingly. For one thing, the government can invite advertising agencies to design public service advertisements to raise people's awareness of community. For another, the community committee should launch mini-games or sports activities regularly or on festivals or holidays, so as to engage more denizens in the neighborhood.

In a nutshell, a supportive community is gradually turned into a lonely island by a self-reliant and competitive economic pattern and diversified technological innovations, the status quo that can only be altered by the endeavors of both the authority and the community leaders.

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