写作老师经验长谈 如何提升雅思写作水平之语法篇

1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.

2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.

3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.

4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.

5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.

6. Government needs to protect our environment.

7. Teacher salaries rose from 70% in 1981 to 80% in 2001.

8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.

9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.

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1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.

缺少and/so连接词

2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.

比较对象错误

应该是....better than that in urban areas.

3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.

动词数量问题(更深层次是非谓语错误)

sit和talk都加ing

4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.

最简单粗暴但是很多同学犯的错误

benefit改成beneficial
 

5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.

逻辑主语的问题，逗号的后面应该改成

......., parents need to supervise students at home.

6. Government needs to protect our environment.

government是可数名词哦

7. Teacher salaries rose from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991.

40%和50%后面各加一个of the total school spending(来源自剑8T2T1)

8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.

reduce表示的并不是具体数字的下降，改成简单的decline/decrease/drop即可

9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.

不要使用定从去描述句子，你可以用with连接

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关于雅思写作的语法水平提升

脑袋里面暂时就想到了这九个小句子，如果你觉得可以轻松找到8个句子全部的语法错误所在，那么理论上来说，你应该是具备了6.5及6.5分以上分数的语法水平，请注意我的措词，仅仅是语法水平，但这个语法水平是必不可少的。如果有4~5个句子你可以比较轻松的找到问题，那么6分的语法水平应该是差不多的，这些问题是找我批改的作文里面最容易出现的一些简单问题(除了句子5稍微有一点点难)，避免这些可以帮助写作6.5分以下的同学提高0.5分左右，当然，还有单词的拼写、可数or不可数(这个其实对我来说也是烦死人= =)以及主谓一致等小问题，都要尽可能的避免。原来有个学生听了我的课，跑去跟助教说“Panda老师说了，语法错误是没关系的，错了也不减分!”我听到助教的反馈之后表示很无奈，因为我的原话是“如果你在一篇大作文or一篇小作文里面犯的所有错误控制在3~4个，那么考官如果大发慈悲or眼神不太好，其实并不会减分”。我也发现有一些同学是只会听到对他们有利的话，至于是不是有条件or前提，他们不管= =那么如果是要求7or7以上的写作分数，请你尽量保证整篇文章不要出现语法错误吧亲~