2018年雅思图表小作文范文品:成人继续接受教育培训的理由

论题:成人持续接受教育训练的理由,以及它的费用该由谁来承当的查询计算(共192词,9分级,为线图+饼图的组合)。


行文简洁明了,读之非常痛快。在小编看来,可谓是雅思写作的极简主义风格的最好样品。


最新雅思图表小作文范文品读 混合图之成人教育现状图1

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown above.Write at least 150 Words.


图表展示的是成人持续接受教育训练的理由,以及它的费用该由谁来承当的查询计算。请为大学讲座写一篇150字以上的陈述。


雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+饼图)9分范文:


The summary of a survey on adult education is presented in the 2 charts. The bar chart summarizes the factors that caused adults to continue their education, while the pie chart shows the public opinion regarding the funding of adult education.(扼要概括导入)

According to the bar chart, 40% of the respondents mentioned “interest in the subject” as the reason they decided to go back to school. This factor was followed closely by the aim to gain qualification at 38%. On the other hand, only 9% of the survey participants said that they went to school in order to meet more people. This is the least popular reason among the 7 given.(细节段1,剖析图表1)

Among all the people surveyed regarding the funding, 40% of them felt that this adult education should be the responsibility of the individual. Although 35% of them thought that the employers should lend the helping hand, only 25% agreed that the taxpayers should share the burden.(细节段2,剖析图表2)

In summary, the survey showed a mixed opinion regarding the reasons and the funding for adults education.(扼要总结)

附雅思小作文simon考官引荐套路

For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所拿手的图表作文4段9句大法,详细结构如下:

1.Introduction: 1 sentence,Introduction阶段,1句话介绍图表粗心足矣

2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要

3.First 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences

4.Second 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。

三、四段为细节段,每段3句做详细的特征或规则的描述。

当然,Simon同学不忘弥补,这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构,好文无定法,我们也不需求拘泥于9句,只需内容表达的需求,8句,10句都是没问题的。

留意:simon考官建议雅思小作文无须总结!我们可留神这一点。当然小作文是否需求写总结段,雅思届尚无结论。



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