叶毅斌:11月8日雅思考试冲刺作文写法指导和范文

1. Many national leaders believe that the global stagnant economy need the urgent cooperation between countries ,and one of the current
priorities of government is to promote the economic cooperation and cope with the difficult situation together .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2.Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery or chemistry technology. However, some of the methods or chemistry ways may be dangerous to human health, and have negative effect on societies. To what degree do you agree or disagree?

3.More people eat unhealthy diets and do not do enough exercises. Why? How to encourage
people to cultivate healthier lifestyles.

4.Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computer.

5.Customers are faced with increasing amounts of advertising due to the competition among companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? And what measures can be taken to protect their interests?

  The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that children of the poor know this, and those of the wealthy do not. The wealthy, though, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money. Who on earth will do the job better? someone skilled in earning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent?  In fact, both wealthy and poor children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal, or in the school of hard knocks.  Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education. (101words)


 

  点评:这段的内容感觉写得不够直接,还是在分析对方观点的漏洞!请注意,前面让步段已经这么写过了,那么这一段最好是正面地论证自己的观点,这样从内容上来说更 convincing 一点!此外,需要说明的是,大家发现作者的内容还是有一定深度,但是这是要有一定的英语功底才行的!如果英语功底不行的话,建议内容不要写太深,因为那样容易造成考官看不懂你在说什么!


上一段可以这样写:As is mentioned above, education plays an undeniable and decisive role in this controversial topic.There are plentiful stories to prove this. For example, the well- known billionaire Bill Gates… Nevertheless, we still can find vivid stories of poor children form. poor families remain …So , we can safely draw the conclusion that it is the education that…….
最后一段:Therefore, a poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth. A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management; the key to developing this skill is education.
点评:最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法,即 education. 它没有像传统的结尾段那样简单的重申自己的观点。



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