2012年9月1日雅思范文:鼓励运动

 2012年9月1日雅思范文:鼓励运动

谢振礼雅思范文:鼓励运动

IELTS 2012年9月1日真题

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猫头鹰在线写作实验室

猪八戒似非而是的逻辑

 

 


相近真题>Many countries spend a lot of money on preparing competitors to take part in major international events such as the Olympics and the World Football Cup (FIFA) games.  Some people argue that it would be better to spend this money on encouraging children to take up sporting activities from a young age.  What is your opinion?  Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

 

谢振礼老师无法证实九月第一场雅思写作试题真相。网友回忆不完整,所以只得把类似真题还原如上。猫头鹰在线写作实验室的考古题库中找到两道烤鸭熟悉的真题,可是议论角度毫不相关(在网上可以看到几十篇不同的相关范文)。

 

这一篇‘鼓励运动’--主题:投资鼓励儿童从事运动,对于身心健康极为重要。结构:

 

起 身体健康+心理健康

承 身体健康

转 心理健康

合 身体健康+心理健康


无关旧题>Popular events like the World Football Cup (FIFA) games and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.


无关旧题>The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sports.  Do you think that the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

 

 

》实验范文:Sporting Activities

 

It seems that nowadays international events, such as the Olympic Games and the World (FIFA) Cup, are particularly motivating for children to take up sports in many countries.  To be fair, while spending money on preparing elite competitors to shine on the international stage is worthwhile, a country ought not to ignore an investment strategy that could help every child to cultivate a passion for doing exercise from an early age.  The idea is not making a medal winner out of every child but to let the child pursue something that is rewarding, both physically and mentally, in later life.

 

On the one hand, playing games, besides being fun, helps a child to stay physically fit. Usually small children are energetic, so playing sports is like energy put to good use; so much so, any investment on the part of the government in this respect is like money put to good use.  Because physical exercise builds the healthy body, we should have a special budget to upgrade our kids' physical fitness.  If not, we will be raising an obese and unfit generation.  That is to say, engaging in different kinds of sporting activities is essential to a child's physical development in different ways, all translating into overall physical benefits.  For example, games that involve running, kicking or throwing a ball strengthen the arms and legs, and swimming provides a full body workout, and so on.

 

On the other hand, researches say that children who play sports tend to be in a mentally happier state of mind than those who do not.  And probably there is no match to that kind of mental happiness which this brings.  The same reports explain that sports are a form of exercise that generates what is called 'happiness molecules' in the body, thus restoring the mental health by easing stress and releasing emotions.  In view of this, public facilities like sports parks should be timely built and sufficiently funded at as many key destinations as possible in order to ensure the younger generation's mental health.  To put it in another way, by strengthening their muscles and bones for a sound body, children could also benefit greatly from playing sports for a positive mind.  With that positive mentality, it is very likely that those kids who regularly play sports also fare well in academics at school.

 

Although it is not necessary to make every child a sport hero or a professional football star for the next generation, it must be a country's responsibility to create a sporting environment for their physical and mental wellbeing.  However important it is to foster national pride and unity through preparing our competitors in international events, we cannot afford not to motivate our kids to play sports here and now.  So, should strictly money be the issue, some of today's children who are good enough in sports can win Olympic medals, or even play for money.  (Essay created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh, essay3663@hotmail.com )

 

 

》写作技巧:猫头鹰变成猪八戒

 

放马后炮:又谈剑桥雅思范文--“宁可相信 不可迷信(缺点找不到 优点学不到)”

 

乌鸦嘴猫头鹰的以上评论遭人误解,夜猫子如猪八戒饱受‘剑桥情人’用鸡蛋作‘无情’的攻击。这是好现象,到底多方的雅思写作观点,总有若干看法确实值得名师学者争议。关于雅思作文,猪八戒也有猪八戒的看法。虽然不够正经,却也不流于陈腐俗套。

 

插入三例。看一看猪雅思怎样回答Task 2试题。到底是什么逻辑?难道是答题离谱?该当何罪?

 

真题一:为何上大学?请猪八戒提出上大学的理由。

 

猪答题:上大学的原因不仅是为了扩大知识领域,体验社会意识,从事职业准备;背后的关键多半是不愿意辜负父母的期待,也就是望子成龙望女成凤的压力。(见猫头鹰实验范文)

 

 

真题二:“狗类是人类的朋友”。猪八戒,你同意不同意这一句话?

 

猪答题:狗类天生就是人类最忠实的朋友;可是有些人类需要经过好好的调教才能成为狗类的最好朋友。(见猫头鹰实验范文)

 

 

真题三:“在人际关系里,人们有时候不应该只说实话”。猪八戒,你同意不同意这一句话?

 

猪答题:该说实话的时候就说实话,不过有时候谎言纯洁如白色。猪八戒个人认为人情世故,往往真心的爱意还需跑在冷漠的事实之前。比方说,敢说从来不骗女人的男人就不像真正的男人;敢说从来不让男人骗的女人也不像女人。(见猫头鹰实验范文)

 

网友应该自由判断和模仿百姓雅思范文的优点。何不让百家(包挂猪家)齐放?所以无需恶意地吹毛求疵,因而小看猪雅思与众不同的想法。议论文的没有观点的错对,从来就没有标准答案。考官范文写得再好,母语造句再地道,也只是一个好答案,不是唯一的好答案。所有的好答案也必须有说服读者的论证。猪八戒论证宁愿似非而是,不愿似是而非。

 

有时读者真好像专意情人,眼里只偏爱剑桥范文如完美‘西施’。不凡极度迷信考官的烤鸭也许以为原创若不是来自剑桥,几乎可以一律视同‘东施效颦’,简直活像猪八戒:两面不像雅思人。此想法当然也有几分道理,却未免忽视了猪八戒的顽皮把戏--做法化身变为佳人样。其实,假设考前此刻对于写作单项考试仍然八字没有一撇,谁又不想占时学猪八戒的变身【改写】本领,那还怕骗不过心软如情人的的评分考官?

 

猪童鞋被迫无奈随行西游取经。取什么雅思写作经?干脆花钱到培训班报VIP钻石保证班算了。那还不都是【文法造句】和【逻辑论证】?

 

 


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