6月18日雅思考试写作大作文范文--教育类话题

摘要:6月18日雅思大作文考得依然是一篇关于教育类话题的作文:It is the responsibility of schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?来看这篇范文!

6月18日大作文依旧是教育类,连续3次考教育类的话题了,所以可别觉得考完教育类就换其他的主题,教育类可是最大的主题之一,连考也十分的正常!不过题目倒不是特别的难,能想到的观点也还有一些,来看一篇范文吧!

Task:

It is the responsibility of schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

除了提供正规教育外,学校的责任是教导良好的行为,你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

Sample answer:

When it comes to the issue about the range of schools' responsibilities, some people may argue that, apart from academic study, schools should also teach students how to behave properly, but I may not agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, early education including moral education could serve to the development of the society. Children and pre-teen students may be impotent to judge right and wrong by themselves. If schools could offer them necessary education, they may accept those rules and criteria without too much rebellion. Then, when children grow older, there may exist fewer crimes since they have been reminded of that they should follow specific rules and laws. Nevertheless, there still exist more detriments caused by such behavior.

Initially, the main duty of schools is not to educate children morally, but cultivate their knowledge and interest. It is acknowledged that teachers of schools have acquired their diplomas, which may be a prerequisite for their teaching. However, moral education is different from other fields and teachers also need to be trained in terms of how to effectively communicate with and guide students. Thus, it may not be proper to ask normal teachers to teach children how to behave because it may not be what they are gifted in.

Furthermore, sometimes, teachers may not behave so well, due to which they cannot be a model for students. Currently, there exist increasingly more scandals concerning about schools and teachers. For example, plagiarism and improper harassment towards students may sometimes be reported by social media. With such news, it may be risky to trust all teachers since judging whether an adult is a moral model or not seems more difficult.

In sum, considering that teachers may just specialize in their own majors and sometimes they also have moral issues, it may not be proper to rely on schools to teach students how to comply with rules and criteria.

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