雅思小作文范文分享 独居人口比例

请看最新的雅思a类小作文话题,关于混合图题型(柱状图+饼状图):The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households(在英国2011年,不同年龄段独居人口的男女比例,以及独居家庭的房间数统计)。

2018雅思图表小作文混合图范文分享 独居人口比例图1

雅思图表小作文混合图9分范文:

The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 2011. The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.

Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories. We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.

A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in 2011 were female. Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, and 76% of those aged 85 or over. By contrast, among younger adults the figures for males were higher. For example, in the 35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.

In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms, while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total. Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.(189 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路

For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法,具体结构如下:

1.Introduction: 1 sentence,Introduction段落,1句话介绍图表大意足矣

2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要

3.First 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences

4.Second 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。

三、四段为细节段,每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。

当然,Simon同学不忘补充,这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构,好文无定法,大家也不需要拘泥于9句,只要内容表达的需要,8句,10句都是没问题的。

PS:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,雅思届尚无定论。



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