雅思小作文满分范文:老龄人口所占人口比例的变化以及比较

关于雅思写作,网上流传着各色滥竽充数的范文,小编私以为,这些粗糙的范文的存在,是中国烤鸭雅思写作平均分低下的众多原因之一。是故小编浪迹网络搜集了前考官simon的雅思a类小作文共计41篇,全部采用他惯常的4段式套路,字数一般不过200词,绝对是雅思写作范文里的一股清流,非常养眼。请看本文针对常规题型的雅思小作文线图范文,话题是三国在1940-2040年间老龄人口所占人口比例的变化以及比较,全文共178词,9分级。

2018最新雅思Task1写作满分范文 线图之老龄人口变化图1

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

该线图展示日本瑞典和美国三国在1940-2040年间65岁以上人口所占比例的变化情况。请作答。

雅思图表小作文线图9分范文:

The line graph compares the percentage of people aged 65 or more in three countries over a period of 100 years.

It is clear that the proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.

In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The proportions of elderly people in the USA and Sweden rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990. By contrast, the figures for Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.

Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of elderly people is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the Japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and the USA will be slightly lower, at about 25% and 23% respectively.(178 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一:话题重述

段二:概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三:详述特征规律一

段四:详述特征规律二

注意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,无定论。

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