雅思写作6条提分建议

雅思写作要进步,有些必定的路径,比方多训练,多了解考试的题型和论题,比方把握根本的学术文章的框架。那么在此之外,还有一些能够如虎添翼的当地需求咱们去做,听听这位前考官是怎样说的。6条良知主张,中英对照。

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雅思写作进步主张之保证句式多样性

Once you know the different types of sentences, you should practice using them. The most difficult one is the compound-complex sentence, but even if you don’t know that, you can still get a good score with a mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences. The key is varying the length and type of sentence so it sounds natural. Look at this example:

如果你知道不同的语句类型,你就能够试着多多练习。在众多句型中,复合杂乱句式最难的,不过就算你不明白这个语法,尝试用一系列的简单句,杂乱句,和复合句相结合来写这篇文章,你也能够得到一个很好的分数。这个要害就在于语句类型和语句长度要多变,这样写作文也会比较天然。看一个下面的比如:

Firstly, children watch too much TV. It’s bad for their health. It can make them addicted. They will spend too much time indoors. This can make them fat.

The sentences are all short and could easily be mixed together into more interesting patterns

这个比如就是语句太短,你能够把语句衔接在一起,而且得到一个愈加风趣的版别。

Firstly, children watch too much TV, which is bad for their health. This habit can cause them to become addicted, resulting in them spending too much time indoors and thus getting fat.

雅思写作进步主张之紧记固定调配

Students preparing for the IELTS exam always want to study lots of vocabulary. This is understandable as vocabulary is important for understanding and making yourself understood. However, knowing a word’s meaning is very different from being able to use it. Learn a word in context and you will be able to apply it more easily. When you are learning vocabulary, pay attention to what words commonly go together.

学生们在准备雅考虑试的时分总会学习许多的词汇,雅思词汇关于咱们进步对英文的了解是十分有重要的。可是有些时分,知道一个词语的意义和会运用它仍是有必定差异的。在文章中学习一个单词会使得你在运用这个词时愈加简单。当你学习词汇的时分,必定要注意的是什么姿态的调配会常常在一起。

咱们来举几个比如:

Verb + thought:

Spare a thought for 想到,替……考虑

Spare a thought for all those who are homeless on a cold night like this.

想到那些在寒冷的夜晚中无家可归的人。

Hear ones thought 倾听……的主意

Have you given the new proposal any thought yet? We’re keen to hear your thought

你有没有考虑新提议了吗?咱们巴望听到你的主意吗?

The thought just occurs to me that it’s mum’s birthday tomorrow and we haven’t got her a card.

我突然间想到了明天是我妈妈的生日,咱们还没有给她卡片呢。

Gather one’s thought 理理思路

The President was taken aback by the question and took a minute to gather his thoughts.

总统被这个问题吓了一跳,用一分钟的时间来收拾思路。

Noun + preposition + thought:

great deal of thought 许多考虑

Shirley doesn’t devote a great deal of thought to her appearance.

雪莉对她的表面没有太多主意

school of thought思维派系

One school of thought contends that modern man originated in Central Africa.

一种学派以为现代人类起源于非洲中部。

train of thought 思路,思绪

Sorry, where was I? I’ve lost my train of thought.

对不住,我提到哪里了?我刚刚没了思路。

雅思写作进步主张之防止运用really, so, a lot, very等口语化词

In IELTS writing, you need to write an essay, using “academic” language. So your goal should be to be reasonably formal/academic. To do so, you should not use imprecise language like really, so, a lot, very, etc

在雅思写作中,你需求运用学术语言,你的目标是正式和学术,所以你不要运用较为口语化的really, so , a lot and very.

举一些比如

Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is very hard.

==> Use a stronger word: Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is difficult

Very good ==> top-notch, splendid, terrific, excellent, magnificent, fabulous, outstanding, etc

Very bad ==> horrible, terrible, outrageous, distressing, awful, etc

Very delicious ==> appetizing, delectable, flavorful, scrumptious, enjoyable, palatable, etc

Robot-driven car is really controversial

==> Robot-driven car is controversial

A lot of IELTS learners share their great tips on IELTS writing, speaking on IELTS Material website.

==> Many/A great number of/ A multitude of IELTS learners……

雅思写作进步主张之不要在雅思写作中运用缩略形式

It’s better to write out the words like:

最好写成一下的姿态

Don’t ==> do not;Can’t ==> cannot;Mustn’t ==> must not;Couldn’t ==> could not

Wouldn’t ==> would not;Isn’t ==> is not;Haven’t ==> have not;Hasn’t ==> has not

雅思写作进步主张之防止运用There is/ There are

When you write, try to write your ideas in a clear & concise way. There is/there are is extra words that are not needed. So just leave them out to make your sentences stronger and straight to the point.

当你在写作的时分,尽力将你的主意用一种简练的办法出现出来。有些词语是不需求的,这样能够使你的语句愈加直戳要点。举例:

There are many issues that students have to face at university

==> Students face a multitude of issues at university

雅思写作进步主张之把握语句根本类型

It’s really important that you know the difference between a simple sentence and a complex sentence. You don’t need to know the terminology, but it is important that you can form full sentences. Knowing the sentence types means being able to avoid these cardinal sins of writing:

了解简单句和杂乱句式的差异很重要,你不需求知道术语,可是你需求有能力自己完结一个语句的写作。了解语句类型能够协助你防止许多根本的写作过错,比方:句不成句,语句成分残损,粘连句,逗号误接句

雅思写作常见过错1. SENTENCE FRAGMENTS:句不成句

This is the most common grammar error IELTS students make. A sentence fragment cannot be a sentence by itself. It does not even have one independent clause.

Remember: a simple sentence is an independent clause, which requires 3 things:

1. A subject

2. A verb

3. A complete thought

这是雅考虑生经常犯的过错。残损语句成分的语句片断是不能够独自成句的,由于他并不具有成为一个完好的独立分句的要素。记住,一个简单句就是一个合格的独立分句,它由3部分组成

主语,谓语,和一个完好的思路

Sometimes it seems to be a sentence, but if we examine it closely it lacks the necessary parts and thus cannot stand alone.

有时看起来像一个语句,可是当咱们细心研讨时会发现它缺少了许多很要害的成分,因此它并不能成为一个独立的语句。

Examples:

Ø The doctor worked round the clock. Operating on the boy.

Ø As India has entered the WTO. The local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

咱们怎样改正这些语句呢?

Corrections:

Ø The doctor worked around the clock, operating on the boy.

Ø As India has entered the WTO, the local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

雅思写作常见过错2. RUN-ON SENTENCES:粘连句

A run-on sentence consists of two or more main clauses that are joined together without proper punctuation (comma, semi-colon, period, etc). We often speak in run-on sentences but our pauses indicate meaning; however, when we write we need to use punctuation to break up our sentences and impart proper meaning.

Comma splices occur when two independent clauses are joined by a comma. Remember: a comma is not strong enough to join these clauses itself! You need a conjunctive coordinator to complement it, or else use a semi-colon and a conjunctive adverb.

Most importantly, to do well in the IELTS writing you don’t need to be a punctuation expert. Just knowing commas and periods is usually sufficient for a good grade.

粘连句包含着两个或更多的主句,他们连在一起,没有标点分隔(逗号、分号、句号等)。咱们在说话的时分经常运用这样的粘连句,可是咱们能够用中止来表述清楚意义。在写文章的时分,咱们需求用标点符号来分隔咱们的语句,让它有更明确的表达意义。

雅思写作常见过错3 逗号误接句

就是两个独立主句之间逗号衔接,这是许多考生会犯的过错。记住,逗号不能链接两个独立的语句,你需求增加衔接词来使它变完好,或许运用分号或许衔接副词。

更重要的一点,想在雅思写作中拿高分,你不需求对一切标点符号的运用都一目了然,了解逗号和句号的运用办法就足够了。

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