雅思写作小作文+范文：访问爱尔兰游客的比率

Two pie charts describing the proportions of visits to Ireland by age, gender and type of visit

两张饼图描述了按年龄、性别和访问类型划分的访问爱尔兰游客的比例

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The pie charts below show the proportions of visits to Ireland last year by age group, and by gender and type of visit.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

下面的饼状图显示了去年按年龄组、性别和访问类型划分的访问爱尔兰游客的比例。

通过选择和报告主要特征来总结这些信息，并在相关的地方进行比较。

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范文：

Both pie charts focus on the proportions of visits to Ireland last year. However, while one provides data on the proportion of the different age groups of people who visited Ireland last year, the second pie chart provides data on the gender of the visitors and their reasons for visiting.

It can be clearly seen that the 25-34 year old and 45-54 year old cohorts comprised the largest proportion of visitors and that most people came to lreland for leisure, not business.

The first pie chart shows that three age groups made up most of last year's visitors to lreland. These were 25 to 34 year-olds(23%),35 to 44 year-olds(19%), and 45 to 54 year-olds(23%). Four other age groups made up the rest, ranging from 6% to 11% of visitors.

The second pie chart shows that lreland received last year more male visitors than female visitors (56% to 44%). Business trips to Ireland did not make up a very significant amount of trips,17% in total; however, the amount of business visits conducted by males was much higher,13%, compared to 4% female business visits.

两张饼状图都侧重于去年访问爱尔兰的比例。然而，虽然一个饼图提供了去年访问爱尔兰的不同年龄段的人的比例数据，但第二个饼图提供了关于游客的性别和他们的访问原因的数据。

可以清楚地看到，25-34岁和45-54岁的人群在游客中占的比例最大，大多数人来到爱尔兰是为了休闲，而不是商务。

第一张饼图显示，去年到爱尔兰的游客中，三个年龄段的人占了大多数。他们是25至34岁（23%），35至44岁（19%），以及45至54岁（23%）。其他四个年龄组的游客占6%至11%。

第二张饼图显示，去年爱尔兰接待的男性游客多于女性游客（56%对44%）。到爱尔兰的商务旅行并不占很大的比例，总数为17%；然而，男性的商务访问量要高得多，为13%，而女性商务访问量为4%。