7分习作:V119(A):大学每科招同数男女好吗?

写在前面:由于最近较忙,抽不出时间来写范文,但我想出了另一个充实范文的好办法。让我那些考7分或8分的学生的课堂习作来给大家示范参考。

                          ----------------广州仲恺雅思培训中心老师赖劲松

Version 119 Some people suggest that every subject of all universities and colleges enroll equalnumbers of male and female students. Do you agree with the above statement?

(课堂习作作者、7分得主:沉静怡---广州仲恺雅思考点第71期周末班学员)

With the development of society, the discrimination between males and females has been reduced to a certain degree. As a result, some people even suggest that every subject of universities should equal numbers of both gender students. However, in my opinion, it should not be obeyed as a rules for all situations.

To begin with, it is the general quality of students but not their gender which affects the decision of school enrolment. Most importantly, the fact that students have to meet the requirements of taking the subjects they chose. So if the number of each gender is limited, then many students might lose their equal right to take their favorite subjects.

 
Secondly, more and more scientific reports have shown that females and males have different talents to achieve in different realm. Though, nowadays, most work has no longer limited for only one gender, it is a truth that men or women may be superior to certain work. For example, most nurses are females while pilots are usually men. Thus if every subject has to accept equal numbers of male and female students, some special subjects might fail to get enough students for both genders.

Last but not least, the enrolment policy should meet the demands of society but not satisfy purely statistic data.. It is undoubted that some jobs in the world are occupied mostly by one gender, such as soldiers or astronauts. It is not because of discrimination but the special consideration of all features. As a result, universities should consider more about the needs of the special fields. Otherwise,  It will put negative effects on society.

All in all, when considering whether every subject should enroll equal numbers of students of both genders, it should depend on practical features rather than political reasons.


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